You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

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Dear Pat, I hope you are doing well. I received your letter mentioning that you went to an excellent restaurant
last
month. So, I am writing to let you know that my birthday is coming next week. Because of that, I want to throw a party, which will be held in the restaurant you told me about. The theme for the birthday party will be Halloween. Could you please tell me the name of
this
famous dining place? Please
also
include the address of the same, so I can give that to my guests. I am only inviting families and close friends.
Moreover
, I wanted to know about the kind of food
this
place serves and if you have any special recommendations from the menu, please do tell me.
Hence
, I will be able to manage
accordingly
.
In addition
, I am thinking of Italian and Mexican food with
the
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dessert
at the end
. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Vishal Jangrala
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task achievement
The letter effectively communicates the purpose and provides relevant details about the planned birthday party, but you could enhance the depth of your inquiry by perhaps asking about the ambiance or seating arrangements for accommodating your guests.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly from one idea to another to enhance clarity, though the current structure is already quite logical.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately friendly and suit the letter's purpose.
task achievement
Good use of a suitable, friendly, and engaging tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph centers on one main idea, aiding clarity and readability.
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