You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In the last decade, there has been a great increase in global air travel. What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think it is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
Due to
technological advancement, there are various ways of travelling such
as air
, road, and sea. Some individuals claim that travelling by air
significantly increased in the last
decade. This
essay will discuss the possible reasons behind this
in the impending paragraphs and also
give opinion
about the positive or the negative trend.
After analyzing the statement, the most possible contributing factor to Add an article
an opinion
this
issue is the costing
. Prices for Replace the word
cost
air
travel reduced drastically in the past years, which results
in the upward trend of Wrong verb form
resulted
air
travel. In addition
, airline companies are providing excellent facilities at the less prices, which attract a lots
of customers. Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
For example
, Emirates ranked
as Add a missing verb
is ranked
the
one of the best airlines Change the article
apply
due to
the kind of services they provide. They also
provide free upgrade
to business class once a year.
Probing ahead, there is Fix the agreement mistake
upgrades
also
reduction
in the accidents of planes on the runways, which Add an article
a reduction
lessen
fear in the eyes of the customers. Correct subject-verb agreement
lessens
Furthermore
, flights are operated according to
their prescribed schedule as they are
not Verb problem
do
causing
delays and commuters Wrong verb form
cause
were
able to reach their destination on time. Wrong verb form
are
For example
, a recent survey from York university
showed that Capitalize word
University
Air
Canada airline
had caused the least Fix the agreement mistake
Airlines
numbers
of delays in the Canada past year.
In conclusion, global Fix the agreement mistake
number
air
travel is becoming popular because of the services provided by the airline companies at realible
cost. Correct your spelling
reliable
Hence
, in my opinion, it is a positive thing and it is predicted that in the future, this airlines
will offer more discounts and facilities to their customers.Change the determiner
this airline
these airlines
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task response
Ensure that you clearly address all parts of the task. Include more specific reasons and examples to thoroughly support your ideas.
coherence cohesion
Work on maintaining a consistent logical structure throughout your essay. Some points need clearer transitions and organization for stronger flow.
introduction conclusion
You provided a clear introduction outlining the essay's purpose and concluded with a balanced opinion.
supported main points
You included examples and details, such as Emirates and Air Canada, to support your arguments, which helped clarify your points.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?