You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the average monthly temperature in three distinct cities—Paris, Dubai, and
Sydney
.
It is clear that
Sydney
's line has a different shape to the others, which is warmer during the winer
and cooler during the summer.
The temperature in Dubai goes up to more than 35 Celcius in August, Correct your spelling
winter
whereas
the other two places don't show that kind of dramatic number. The hottest weather in Sydney
only reached slightly less than 25. Even that of the european
city accounted for 20. Change the capitalization
European
Also
, from September to March, it can be seen that Paris is the coldest place, amounting to 5 for two months.
Sydney
showed a
relatively stable weather among Correct article usage
apply
three
. The gap between the highest and the lowest Correct article usage
the three
temeprature
was only 10. Correct your spelling
temperature
However
, Dubai and Paris, both experienced significant differences of more than 15 Celcius.Submitted by dob.jeong on
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