Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
Some people would say that
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and people should pay environmental fees Use synonyms
as
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this
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responsibilities
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However
, I don't think money can solve Linking Words
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problem.
I believe there are other methods to tackle Linking Words
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governments' intervention is crucial. The only power, which can control big Linking Words
companies
, are Use synonyms
governments
. They can give either advantages or disadvantages depending on what Fix the agreement mistake
government
companies
do. Use synonyms
For instance
, for those that produce less pollution or take actions to save the planet, we can reduce their tax. If they can get that kind of benefit, they might try to be eco-friendly.
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companies
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a company's
perspectives
, caring about our future can be more beneficial in the long term. In the first place, they might assume that being Fix the agreement mistake
perspective
good
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a good
organizations
is not profitable. Fix the agreement mistake
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However
, it will affect consumers' perception, which can potentially lead them to buy their products more. Linking Words
Finally
, It seems unrealistic to check how much waste each household Linking Words
produce
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for example
, it is very vague to decide how exactly using plastics Linking Words
harm
our ecology. Correct subject-verb agreement
harms
Instead
, to prevent Linking Words
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, we need to have a better education system. Simply being aware of what would happen can actually make people use less harmful containers.
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, suggesting positive alternatives is better than just fining Linking Words
companies
or individuals.Use synonyms
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