The charts below give information on the location and types of dance claases young people in a town in Ausralia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart illustrates the location of
dance
training while
the bar chart shows the type of dance
training that the youth in a city in Australia are partaking.
It can be clearly seen from the pie chart that most Change preposition
in.
classes
are held in private studios. The bar graph shows that ballet is favoured among children
under 11 years
old whereas
children
from 11 to 16 years
old prefer modern dance
.
The pie graph shows that private studios are the place where most children
go for dance
classes
with almost half of the share. School halls come in second with 24%, followed by community halls & other locations at 18%. College-based dance
studios are the least preferred, with only 10% of the total share.
The bar graph illustrates that ballet is preferred by younger children
while
modern dance
is preferred by older children
. Although
only 300 students
from the age of 11 to 16 participate in ballet classes
, 600 students
below 11 years
participate. Conversely
, above 500 students
from 11-16 years
old partake in modern dance
classes
, even though only 300 younger students
participate. Nonetheless
, participation in tap dance
is almost similar, with around 450 people in both age groups.Submitted by aribawadzaki on
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