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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance claases young people in a town in Ausralia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance claases young people in a town in Ausralia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart illustrates the location of
dance
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 training
while
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 the bar chart shows the type of
dance
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 training that the youth in a city in Australia are partaking
.
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in.
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 It can be clearly seen from the pie chart that most
classes
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 are held in private studios. The bar graph shows that ballet is favoured among
children
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 under 11
years
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 old
whereas
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children
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 from 11 to 16
years
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 old prefer modern
dance
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. The pie graph shows that private studios are the place where most
children
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 go for
dance
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classes
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 with almost half of the share. School halls come in second with 24%, followed by community halls & other locations at 18%. College-based
dance
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 studios are the least preferred, with only 10% of the total share. The bar graph illustrates that ballet is preferred by younger
children
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while
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 modern
dance
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 is preferred by older
children
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.
Although
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 only 300
students
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 from the age of 11 to 16 participate in ballet
classes
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, 600
students
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 below 11
years
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 participate.
Conversely
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, above 500
students
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 from 11-16
years
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 old partake in modern
dance
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classes
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, even though only 300 younger
students
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 participate.
Nonetheless
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, participation in tap
dance
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 is almost similar, with around 450 people in both age groups.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, classes, children, years, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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