It is observed that in many contries, not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effects on society?

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few years, it has become less interested in studying Science majors among the pupils

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some potential causes and propose the effects that can

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on countries. One of the most significant reasons is a lack of well-paying job opportunities in these

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life in future. Another issue is these

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intensive laboratory work and

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, if the rate of prospective students

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the lack of innovation and development of technology will be increasingly significant, and

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the country may face environmental and healthcare problems and other global challenges without any solution.

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, Interest in science majors has declined

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limited job opportunities and demanding workloads.

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trend may lead to a shortage of skilled professors, hinder innovation, and leave countries unprepared for future environmental and healthcare challenges.

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Ensure that all points directly align and contribute to the central thesis, enhancing fluidity between the causes and effects discussed.

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The essay effectively presents an introduction that outlines the issues and a conclusion that summarizes the main points discussed.

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It is observed that in many contries, not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effects on society?

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour.What are the causes and possile solutions for this problem.

A number of people are moving from rural area to city’s. Is this a positive or a negative development?

money offered for postgraduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in one company for their entire career. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

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