Some people believe that it is parents who teach children to recycle waste. While others feel schools are more responsible. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There is no denying the fact that
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educate
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children to
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preserve
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are
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curtail
crucial
.
While
it is a commonly held belief that teaching children
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of
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recycling
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waste
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rely on school, there is
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an argument that supposed it is one of the
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parent's
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responsibalities
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responsibilities
. These
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essays
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from both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, education systems aim to
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people how to
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behave
right before
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class
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a class
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.
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, if the student
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bad
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a bad
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attuide
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attitude
or can not be a good member of
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society
, we do not need
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that system.
In addition
, we should involve
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classes
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the
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science courses
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For example
,
Japan
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education mission,
seeking
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to educate their student to behave right,
then
they care
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teach classes, which reflect the Japanese resedent now.
On the other hand
, teaching child recycle
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was
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one of the home duties. it is
also
possible to say that,
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kids
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relies
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on
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their father's
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father's
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and
mother's
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mothers
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.
Moreover
,
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kids
secere
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secure
for his parents more than
teachers
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his teachers
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.
For instance
, if we apply
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a reward
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systme
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system
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home to the good things that
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children do, we will
see
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motivate them to
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the right things. In conclusion, there
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no easy
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to
this
quesation
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question
. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that we should
to
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share the
responsibiltes
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responsibilities
responsibility
on that matter,
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the hyperd
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approach can build sold generation not
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this
topic only, for all
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of life.
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coherence cohesion
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Your essay addresses the task by discussing both views related to who should teach children to recycle waste.
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You provided examples, such as the Japan education mission, to support your points.

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