The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts demonstrate the proportions of different age groups of
population
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the population
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of
Yemen
and Italy in 2000,
as well as
predictions for 2050.
Overall
, what stands out the most from the charts in terms of
Yemen
is that there were more
population
of less than 14 years in earlier
year
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years
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which is predicted to decrease in future.
However
, in Italy,
population
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the population
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of younger people
reamined
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remained
the lease in both years. Focusing on
Yemen
, by 2050, Italy’s
population
pyramid is expected to become more top-heavy with a large proportion of the
population
aged 60 and above, suggesting potential challenges like increased healthcare needs and pension provision. Turning to Italy, in 2050, Italy’s
population
pyramid is expected to become more top-heavy with a large proportion of the
population
aged 60 and above, suggesting potential challenges like increased healthcare needs and pension provision.Italy's
population
in 2000 already had a substantial percentage of individuals aged 60 and above compared to
Yemen
,
this
proportion is expected to increase significantly by 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, yemen with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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