The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year.
The given chart
show
the percentages of Change the verb form
shows
the
children aged 11 to 16 in the UK Correct article usage
apply
travel
in a year to schools, broken down into four different Correct pronoun usage
who travel
mode
of transport and distances.
Change to a plural noun
modes
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that pupils are prone to walk or ride a bicycle for short distances, Linking Words
whereas
Linking Words
that
of longer Correct determiner usage
those
miles
are likely to commute by either car or bus Use synonyms
instead
. Linking Words
However
, it is interesting to note that Linking Words
certain
range of distance can be Correct article usage
a certain
travel
by any means of travelling.
In regards Wrong verb form
travelled
with
distance, a closer look at Change preposition
to
bar
chart Correct article usage
the bar
report
that the closer the school the more the students walk to school. It is noticeable that 90% of the students walk to their institute if Correct subject-verb agreement
reports
its
located within Correct your spelling
it is
a
0-1 Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Use synonyms
miles
, followed by bicycle at 50% and the other two of less than 10%, respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
mile
Moreover
, Bicycles are Linking Words
most
preferable inCorrect quantifier usage
apply
1
-2 Correct article usage
the 1
miles
range at slightly above 75%. Use synonyms
While
Linking Words
Linking Words
further
Change preposition
for further
distance
of over 5 Fix the agreement mistake
distances
miles
students Use synonyms
are
opt for Unnecessary verb
apply
bus
at 70%, a shorter Add an article
the bus
a bus
rage
between 2-5 Correct your spelling
route
miles
can be travelled by either bus or bicycle with a small difference at 50%.Use synonyms
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