Writing task 1 The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.

Writing task 1 

The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.
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The given line chart compares data about the proportion of rivers that flowed in 4 various regions of the UK and had the best chemical quality from 1990 to 2002.
Overall
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, it is important that the trend of Scotland and Northern Ireland
instead
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of two other areas increased over the period of 12 years.
According to
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the diagram, at the start, Wales, the main region where rivers had the best chemical quality in 1990, hit 95%;
then
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its fraction stabilized until 1998;
however
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, it reduced moderately to 80% in 2002;
In contrast
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, the second one whose name was Northern Ireland reached the constant portion at roughly 85% between 1990 and 1998;
thereafter
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, it rose slightly to 95% in 2000, and its percentage was constant until 2002. The graph demonstrates that in the beginning, England touched 45%;
then
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it climbed significantly and hit the vertex at just under 70% in 1996, but it declined enormously and scored the minimum point at 30% in 1998;
although
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, it jumped to nearly a half in 2002. The
last
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district was Scotland;
moreover
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, it hit just over one-fifth in 1990;
then
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it increased to 30% and it was stable until 1996 after that, it leapt considerably and peaked at almost 60% in 2000;
nevertheless
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, it fell to 40% in 2002.
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