The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pies above illustrate the
number
of visitors to the Museum of Ashdown before and after refurbishing, the charts display people's answers to the surveys that were given to measure their satisfaction during both periods.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
number
of satisfied people is relatively high before and after refurbishing with a clear and dramatic increase in the very satisfied individuals section in the
year
after. in detail , in the previous
year
, the
number
of dissatisfied was extremely high at 40% rate,
this
number
fell down to 15% In the
year
following the work,
this
is
also
true for the very dissatisfied section of the pie which decreased by half going from 10% to 5%.
Furthermore
, The satisfied category of the pie had a slight increase starting at 30% and finishing up at 40%,
moreover
, the very satisfied section noticed a sharp increase of 20% more than The previous
year
.
Lastly
, the unresponsive individual's percentage remained the same at 5%.
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