Your company is going to organise a special training course for a few staffs. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course. Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter: give details about the course describe what equipment you will need for the course ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre

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Dear Sir/Madam Hope

this

letter finds you well and believe you are in good health and in high spirits .I am writing to tell you that I booked one conference

center

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which we will use for

training

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a training

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course

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apply

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next week.

Firstly

, I tell you that location is near to the Railway station so we do not need to provide

cab

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facility for staff to reach

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conference

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the conference

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center

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Secondly

this

course duration is five hours so I would tell everyone to bring their own food because

conference

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kitchen is

temporary

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closed

due to

construction work.

Furthermore

,I want to

take

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permission from you regarding the change of arrival time as a lot of students coming from country side I believe they do not

reach

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at the sharp 7' clock as

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train

start

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from

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8'o clock. I suggest you to change the arrival time.

Last

but not least, I recommend to every staff to bring safety shoes as construction work is going

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the building. Looking forward to hearing from you. Any

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welcome

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me. Navdeep

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task achievement

Provide more details about the course content and structure to fully address the task.

task achievement

Request specific equipment needed for the course, mentioning items like projectors or whiteboards.

coherence cohesion

Use clearer transitions between ideas to enhance the logical flow of the letter.

coherence cohesion

Organize the content into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single main idea to improve coherence.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear greeting and closing, maintaining a polite and formal tone throughout, which is suitable for the task.

task achievement

The letter raises relevant concerns about arrival times and safety, demonstrating thoughtfulness towards attendees' needs.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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