The graph below gives information about the percentages of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentages of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The line graph below shows a quantity of the percentage of the
population
in four Asian countries in cities between 1970 and 2020,
as well as
predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
,
according to
graph
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, all countries have a tendency to grow. Specifically, Malaysia will reach the highest value
while
Thailand will have the smallest
population
in 2040. From 1970 to 2020, Malaysia and Indonesia dramatically increase their urban
population
percentages from 30% to 75% and about 12% to 50%, respectively.
Moreover
, estimations indicate
further
growth for these countries, with numbers climbing to around 82% and 60% for Malaysia and Indonesia, respectively. Meanwhile, the Philippines' urban
population
slightly rose between 1970 and 1990. Afterwards gradually decreased over 10 years, but it has continued to grow and hit a peak of 55% in 2040.
Additionally
, Thailand's urban
population
consistently climbed to around 30%
as well as
steadily grew to approximately 45% in 2040.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • changes over time
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • urbanization
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • rural areas
  • metropolitan areas
  • migration
  • industrialization
  • environmental impact
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