The graph below gives information about the percentages of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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of the percentage of the

population

in four Asian countries in cities between 1970 and 2020,

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predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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all countries

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a tendency

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.

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Malaysia will reach the highest value

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Thailand will have

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population

in 2040. From 1970 to 2020, Malaysia and Indonesia dramatically

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their urban

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percentages from 30% to 75% and about 12% to 50%, respectively.

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, estimations indicate

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growth for these countries, with numbers climbing to around 82% and 60% for Malaysia and Indonesia, respectively. Meanwhile,

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urban

population

slightly rose between 1970 and 1990. Afterwards gradually decreased over 10 years,

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has continued to grow and hit a peak of 55% in 2040.

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Thailand's urban

population

consistently climbed to around 30%

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steadily grew to approximately 45% in 2040.