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The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later, you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

#apartment #defects #repairs #landlord
Dear Sir/Madam, Hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing to explain
my
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 problem which I faced after the
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completion
 work of repair done . As you know my interior light has been changed recently by
technician
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a technician
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 . Again , my room lights are not working properly
due to
 which I was unable to study at night Apart, from
this
 my cooking stove was
also
 repaired but
same
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 problem
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 again. I could not able to cook food at high flame. With these problems . I want to suggest some possible solutions to my problems.
Firstly
, I want my room
full inspection
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from
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 a professional technician , followed by
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 change of lights
of
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 my room.
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 my cooking induction because it was too old .
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in
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any
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 good apartment where I
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 not face these kinds of
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. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from your side. If required contact at my phone number for more information. Yours sincerely, Navdeep
Submitted by navdeepbajaj89 on

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coherence cohesion
Improve sentence structure for better clarity and coherence.
task achievement
Ensure all parts of the task are fully expanded with specific details.
task achievement
Focus on maintaining formal tone and avoid phrases like 'Last but not least' in formal letters.
task achievement
You effectively explained the problems in the apartment repairs.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, adding to its structure.

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