WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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This
bar chart provides key information about the world's estimated
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illiteracy rates in the
last
year, by region ,and by gender in six areas. South
Asia
,
Arab
states
, Sub-saharan Africa ,Latin America and developed
countries
.
Overall
, the
reat
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rate
great
in South
Asia
and
Arab
states
and
Sub-saharan
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Africa in females is higher .we note that the females
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all areas
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higher than males,only in developed
countries
,and Latin America.the persantag so clous Incclod to what shows in the bar.
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South
Asia
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higher by 55% ,followed by South
Asia
by 50% than
Arab
states
. If we talk about the lowest area we will start with developed
countries
by 2% after coming, Latin America. In terms,
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percentage of males
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in South
Asia
,
Arab
states
and Sub-Saharan Africa are very close to each other around 30% .developed
countries
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the lowest
on
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by 1%. If we compare between male and female percentage.The females
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higher than males in all areas, the highest area in both genders will be South
Asia
, and the lowest area is developed
countries
.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words asia, arab, states, countries with synonyms.
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