WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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bar chart provides key information about the world's estimated in
illiteracy rates in the Change preposition
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last
year, by region ,and by gender in six areas. South Asia
,Arab
states
, Sub-saharan Africa ,Latin America and
developed countries
.
Overall
, the reat
in South Correct your spelling
rate
great
Asia
and Arab
states
and Sub-saharan
Africa in females is higher .we note that the femalesCorrect your spelling
Sub-Saharan
an
all areas Correct your spelling
in
is
higher than males,only in developed Correct subject-verb agreement
are
countries
,and Latin America.the persantag so clous
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Asia
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higher by 55% ,followed by South Correct article usage
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Asia
by 50% than Arab
states
. If we talk about the lowest area we will start with developed countries
by 2% after coming, Latin America.
In terms, the
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Asia
, Arab
states
and Sub-Saharan Africa are very close to each other around 30% .developed countries
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by 1%.
If we compare between male and female percentage.The females Correct your spelling
one
is
higher than males in all areas,
the highest area in both genders will be South Change the verb form
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Asia
, and the lowest area is developed countries
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Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words asia, arab, states, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the seventh paragraph.
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