Task 1 The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

Task 1 The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of children, men and women that ate five
portions
of two types of food fruit and vegetables per day in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
it can be seen that during whole
years
all the folks increased in the number of eating
portions
and the most significant percentage were women
while
children
was
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the lowest number of eating food.
To begin
with, women were the highest proportion during the whole year and it witnessed an increase in food in six
years
. The most interesting thing is that in 2006 it reached the peak which was approximately 35% and
then
it saw a slight
dropped
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during 2007 and 2008 around 31% and 30 respectively.
According to
the men was the second preferred in ate
portions
it remained stable in three
years
around
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just 17% and
then
followed by an increase during the five
years
to 25% in 2006.
On the other hand
, children were the least preferred of eating
portions
in the following three
years
it remained stable at around 13% and
then
followed by
increase
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in the following five
years
it is interesting to notice that in the
last
years
witnessed a slight decline of about 21% in 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words portions, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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