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The line graph shows the population figure of different types of turtles in india between1980 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.

The line graph shows the population figure of different types of turtles in india between1980 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of
visitors
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 who chose to accommodate between
cruise
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ships
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 and islands in a specific Caribbean
island
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 from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the total
number
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 of
visitors
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 increased considerably throughout the period.
Although
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 people staying on
cruise
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ships
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initially
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 had a lower
number
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, it exceeded
visitors
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 staying on the
island
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at the end
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 of the period. In 2010, the
number
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 of tourists visiting a Caribbean
island
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 totalled 1
million
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. In the next five years, it increased sharply to just above 2.7
million
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visitors
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.
on the other hand
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, it remained stable at
this
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number
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 in the following year. From 2016 to 2017, the figure for total individuals grew significantly to 3.5
million
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, being the highest
number
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. The
number
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 of
visitors
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 staying on
cruise
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ships
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 and on the
island
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 was about 0.3 and 0.7
million
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 in 2010, respectively. Both figure’s numbers experienced growth Between 2011 and 2015.
However
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, the proportion of tourists who found
cruise
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ships
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 better for staying outnumbered in the middle of 2015 and reached a peak of 2
million
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 people by 2017.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, cruise, ships, island, number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph illustrates
  • depicts
  • changes
  • population figures
  • types of turtles
  • Olive Ridley
  • Leatherback
  • Green turtles
  • measured in thousands
  • the highest
  • followed by
  • remained stable
  • significant decline
  • decreased sharply
  • reached its lowest point
  • gradual increase
  • increased steadily
  • experienced a slight decline
  • remained relatively stable
  • fluctuations
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