The line graph shows the population figure of different types of turtles in india between1980 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.

The line graph shows the population figure of different types of turtles in india  between1980 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of
visitors
who chose to accommodate between
cruise
ships
and islands in a specific Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total
number
of
visitors
increased considerably throughout the period.
Although
people staying on
cruise
ships
initially
had a lower
number
, it exceeded
visitors
staying on the
island
at the end
of the period. In 2010, the
number
of tourists visiting a Caribbean
island
totalled 1
million
. In the next five years, it increased sharply to just above 2.7
million
visitors
.
on the other hand
, it remained stable at
this
number
in the following year. From 2016 to 2017, the figure for total individuals grew significantly to 3.5
million
, being the highest
number
. The
number
of
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
and on the
island
was about 0.3 and 0.7
million
in 2010, respectively. Both figure’s numbers experienced growth Between 2011 and 2015.
However
, the proportion of tourists who found
cruise
ships
better for staying outnumbered in the middle of 2015 and reached a peak of 2
million
people by 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, cruise, ships, island, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph illustrates
  • depicts
  • changes
  • population figures
  • types of turtles
  • Olive Ridley
  • Leatherback
  • Green turtles
  • measured in thousands
  • the highest
  • followed by
  • remained stable
  • significant decline
  • decreased sharply
  • reached its lowest point
  • gradual increase
  • increased steadily
  • experienced a slight decline
  • remained relatively stable
  • fluctuations
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