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The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for the Foreign Language Learning in 2020. Summarise the charts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates about different
languages
 taken by the English speakers at the UK centre in 2020.
Overall
, Mandarin was the most popular
language
 among the women
group
.
While
 the
men
's
group
 choose Arabic mostly. The Spanish
language
 had the same number of
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candidates from both
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genders. In the category of the women
group
, the most popular was
mandarin
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 (27%),
then
 comes the Spanish
language
 which was up to 19%.
while
 Polish, Arabic and French
languages
 had almost similar numbers of the candidates, (11%-10%). Italian and Welsh
,
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 were only chosen by 3-4% of the women, making them the least important from the list. In the category of the
men
group
,
Arabic
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the Arabic
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language
 was chosen by 22% of the people, making it to the top of the list. Spanish remained second most common among other
languages
 (19%).
While
 14% of
men
 choose Manderiam and German
language
. The proportion of the people who had chosen the French and the Italian
also
 remained the same (5%). Only 3% of the
men
 showed interest in the Polish
language
, making it
least
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 popular among the other
languages
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, language, group, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breakdown
  • native English speakers
  • UK Centre for Foreign Language Learning
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • most popular
  • significance
  • notable trends
  • reflected in
  • traditional preferences
  • least popular
  • perceived difficulty
  • potential implications
  • geographical proximity
  • cultural ties
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