People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Choosing a

career

path

is one of the most significant decisions, for its impact in shaping an individual's long-run

job

satisfaction

. Some argue that deciding on a

career

early

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career

and sticking to it can ensure a stable and peaceful life,

while

others believe that shifting between

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different

jobs

can

also

be

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exciting and challenging issue to enjoy.

This

essay will compare and discuss both perspectives and to see the correctness of

pursuading

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pursuing

persuading individuals themselves to make a fast and strong opinion about what to do in careers early. Careers early on/early

career

. One of the primary advantages of selecting a

career

path

at an early age is the opportunity to have an advanced development in a single area. Individuals, who begin their professional journey in the particular areas they chose to major within the university, can have more experiences and practical

knowledges

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knowledge

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that cannot be learned by studying in a college.

For instance

, a graduate who decides to become a doctor after high school can have more time to work in a hospital and

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dive into relevant skills

such

as medicine, healthcare, and so on. After years,

this

special

experience

not only enhances their professional abilities

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but

also

promote

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a sense of mastery, confidence and broad horizons, which is important to future

job

satisfaction

.

However

, the reasons for choosing to switch from one

job

to another can

also

be various. If a person can

achieve mastering

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all of those essential skills for

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different

career

paths,

then

he will not only have a totally flat road

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finding

another

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another job

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jobs

in the labour market

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but

also

have a strong competitive edge

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those employees who are without doesn’t have any

experience

and skills.

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big companies. Other than that,

this

challenge choice can

also

bring more knowledge

that is

unknown

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others who are out of the professional field. A wider and deeper cognition will

then

be developed, and

that is

a

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fascinating

and valuable memory to call back in the future.

Although

those two ideas are all meaningful and persuasive, I totally agree that decide the decision of the

career

path

earlier can make a lot more

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than people imagine. It is true that various

job

experience

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can bring extra horizons and specialized knowledge, but those who frequently change

jobs

usually cannot dive into

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deep knowledge

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so

that

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they will have more

feeling

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of non-academic and struggle with the same and low level of

experience

among all of those different fields. Staying in the same

career

can avoid

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uncertainty and ensure that the employees will get valuable and deeper things from

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. In conclusion,

instead

of moving between different

jobs

and

struggle

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with the social circle, sticking

in

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a single

career

path

can provide stability and

incredebly

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incredibly

incredible

incredibly

high-level

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of

satisfaction

, for exploration and growth

after

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a

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long term.

Therefore

,

career

satisfaction

is

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has

came

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from finding

works

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that is

the dream of

early

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ages/generation so that people can get more pleasure from that.