The diagram shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

Task 1 The picture illustrates the
process
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of making a type of biofuel named ethanol.
Overall
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, the
process
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is cyclical, being separated into production and consumption and containing a total of about 7 stages. There are 5 steps in the production of
this
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biofuel. The first one initiates with the growth of trees and plants
as a result
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of a natural
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called photosynthesis. In the next phase, they are harvested with
a special farming machinery
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special farming machinery
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and
then
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followed by the pre-processing stage, which makes biomass turn into cellulose. After that,
this
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substance
experience
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processing
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a processing
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step, when it is broken into sugars. The
last
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stage of the production includes adding sugars to microbes, which
subsequently
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produces ethanol. In the consumption stage, a wide range of motor vehicles are provided with the produced ethanol as a source of energy. The transports burn and release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.
This
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gas serves as a source of energy for plants and trees to grow, repeating the
process
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.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • biomass
  • ethanol
  • fermentation
  • microorganisms
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • distillation
  • purification
  • dehydration
  • raw materials
  • storage
  • distribution
  • renewable energy
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable fuel
  • concentration
  • impurities
  • alcohol content
  • crop growth
  • conversion process
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