the charts below show the changes in ownership of electical appliances and amount of time spend doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. summarise the informar=tion by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where revelant.
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the
firs
line graph illustrates the proportion of households who have used three electric devices (washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner) Correct your spelling
first
since
1920 to 2019, Change preposition
from
while
the other line graph demonstrates the average number of hours that each househould
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household
had
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has
spend
on doing their relevant duties in their house in a typical week by 2019.
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spent
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the percentages
of using these devices had increased by 2019, Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
while
the amount of time which
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apply
spend
on doing housework in households decreased during Wrong verb form
spent
this
period. It also
can be apparently obviosed
that Correct your spelling
obvious
refrigerator
when Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
it
had almost no Correct pronoun usage
they
client
in 1920 became more popular in 2019.
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clients
According to
the first graph, the proportions of both refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
, which were about 3 and 30 in 1920 in order, rose dramatically until 1960 to approximately %90 and %70 respectively, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
then
followed this
trend with less power to almost %100 for both of them. In addition
, the percentage of using washing machine
which was %40 in 1920 had increased to more than %73 by 2019, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
however
, it faced a little drop between1960
and 1980.
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between 1960
On the other hand
, the amount
of hours per week that households spent their Change the quantifier
number
rutines
in their home had Correct your spelling
routines
routine
droped
by 1960 from about %50 (the maximum in 1920) to %20. Correct your spelling
dropped
Moreover
, this
decline had continued steadily by 2019 when was the less just above %10.Submitted by mortezashamsa on
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