The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
The pie charts illustrate the outcomes of a survey that the library of a university got when it asked full-time and part-time students about its current services, including IT support and opening hours.
Overall
, full-time undergraduates are satisfied with all surveyed services,
while
part-time ones are unhappy with the IT support. Looking at the first two pie charts related to IT service for more details, it is apparent that the majority of full-time students are content, at precisely 87%.
On the contrary
, over half of the part-time interviewees are delighted with the IT assistance.
Moreover
, nearly half of the part-time
group
is dissatisfied with the service provided, which is triple the figure for the full-time
group
. In terms of opening hours, it is evident that both groups are generally happy. Particularly, about two-thirds of part-time students are totally pleased, which is higher than that of the full-time by 5%.
Whereas
, a third of the full-time
group
is quite delighted with the operating time, which is higher than that of the other by 9%. Notably, the percentage of part-time student groups who are disappointed with the opening hours is five times the figure for the full-time
group
.
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