The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart depicted relative price
changed
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changes
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grocery
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in grocery
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products
consisted
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consisting
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of fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009
Overall
, All types of goods that
shows
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are shown
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in the chart increased over the period given, following a similar trend with
consumer-price
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the consumer
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index at the same duration Fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks
priced
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prices
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fluctuated marginally during the first four years before
surged
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surging
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to the end of the time given. In the same way,
consumer-price
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the consumer-price
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index started
around
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at around
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60 points and grew gradually to the
last
year around 160 points
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