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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in five parts of the world in 2006.

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in five parts of the world in 2006.
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The given tables compare data about how many
potatoes
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 were used per Kilogram per person and produced in million tonnes in 5 various continents in 2006.
Overall
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, it was important that most of the
potatoes
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 in the world formed in
Asia
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 and Europe;
additionally
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, Europeans ate them a lot.
According to
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 the graphs,
Asia
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, the main producer of
potatoes
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 in the world in 2006, formed 131.2 for its production and the people who lived in
Asia
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 just used 25.8. The second generator was Europe;
moreover
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, it composed nearly 10 less than
Asia
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 in produced
potatoes
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;
however
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, it reached the first level for using these goods at 96.1. North
America
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 made up 24.7 of its production;
furthermore
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, it constitute the second level of ate them at 57.9. The pictures demonstrate that not only Africa but
also
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 South & Central
America
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 reported roughly the same number for their production at approximately 16. Africa produced more
potatoes
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 than South & Central
America
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, yet it used almost half of South & Central
America
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, which formed 23.6 for using
potatoes
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potatoes, asia, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural capacity
  • Dietary preferences
  • Cultural significance
  • Economic affordability
  • Trade policies
  • Food security
  • Production levels
  • Consumption patterns
  • Imbalance
  • Global agricultural trends
  • Technological advancements
  • Supply chain enhancements
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