In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, talking about different transportation facilities is a

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subject. Some people argue that the

government

should spend more money on the

expanding

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of the railway lines,

while

another group believe that

this

money should be spent on improving public

transportations

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transportation

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. In

this

essay, I will look at

both

views and propose my own opinion. Let’s start by looking at the first group. Some people are

fan

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of the stable

traveling

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by

train

and they believe

government

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should add more railway lines. They say that it would be great if they could travel to every destination on a

train

.

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this

, a considerable drop would happen in buying

airplane

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thickets.

Furthermore

,

traveling

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by

train

is more interesting as you can enjoy the scenery

while

you are sitting in your wagon.

On the other hand

, some have

this

belief that public

transportations

need some improvements. Take old buses as an example. They argue that

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should change these vehicles with new ones to

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future complications.

Moreover

, people who are using

these kind

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of

transportations

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will feel safe and

as a consequence

, more citizens will use them. All things considered, providing good transportation facilities is one of the most important responsibilities of the

government

. So

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, they should decide where to spend their budget. In my opinion, I think it is better to take

both

issues into consideration. What I mean is that they should spend money on

both

train

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industry and public

transportations

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as

both

of them are

so

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important