The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in hudroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration depicts the process in a hydroelectric power station of generated electricity.
Overall
, it is clear from the diagram that the orientation of the water
flow creates speed to move the turbine
during the day. Conversely
at night, the Add a comma
Conversely,
turbine
emptying
the lower Wrong verb form
empties
reservoir
.
In the
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The
first,
by raising the dam we allow the water
to follow the flow from the high level
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high-level
reservoir
to the lower one. However
, the flux of water
creates the speed to turn the turbine
which is linked by the generator, which transfers the rotation power to electricity power.
On the contrary
, the multiple functions of the turbine
emptying the lower reservoir
by pumping the water
into the high reservoir
during the night.Submitted by ykhaich9 on
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