The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in hudroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in hudroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration depicts the process in a hydroelectric power station of generated electricity.
Overall
, it is clear from the diagram that the orientation of the
water
flow creates speed to move the
turbine
during the day.
Conversely
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at night, the
turbine
emptying
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the lower
reservoir
.
In the
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first,
by raising the dam we allow the
water
to follow the flow from the
high level
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reservoir
to the lower one.
However
, the flux of
water
creates the speed to turn the
turbine
which is linked by the generator, which transfers the rotation power to electricity power.
On the contrary
, the multiple functions of the
turbine
emptying the lower
reservoir
by pumping the
water
into the high
reservoir
during the night.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reservoir
  • Elevation
  • Intake tunnel
  • Turbines
  • Generators
  • Electricity transmission
  • Power lines
  • Grid
  • Peak demand
  • Off-peak times
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