The graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 and 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reportin the main features, making comparisions where relevant
The line graph illustrates the percentages of four recycled materials
consists
of paper & cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics that were recycled between 1982 and 2010.
Wrong verb form
consisting
Overall
, paper & cardboard and glass containers were two types of stuff that started recycling in the first year that
given. Correct word choice
apply
whereas
aluminium cans started reprocessed in 1986 and other plastics in 1990.
The percentages of recycled paper & cardboard were fluctuated
sharply, it began Change to the active voice
fluctuated
have fluctuated
around
65 Change preposition
at around
percent
in 1982 and reached to peak at 80 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1994 before Change the spelling
per cent
declined
to 70 Change the form of the verb
declining
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
last
year. Correct article usage
the last
Likewise
, glass containers were unstable dramatically, it
started at 50 Correct pronoun usage
they
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
first
year given and dipped Change the article
the first
in
the lowest point at 40 Change preposition
to
percent
in 1990 after that Change the spelling
per cent
climbed
to the highest point Wrong verb form
climbing
at
60 Change preposition
of
percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
last
ten years of chart
duration.
Correct article usage
the chart
On the other hand
, aluminium cans that initiated reprocessed
in 1986 Wrong verb form
reprocessing
were
increased substantially to Unnecessary verb
apply
the
peak in 2010 Correct article usage
a
around
45 Change preposition
at around
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
as
the same as plastics that began Change preposition
apply
around
3 Change preposition
at around
percent
were slightly increased to the highest point Change the spelling
per cent
around
10 Change preposition
of around
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
at the end
of graph
timeline.Correct article usage
the graph
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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