The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying or drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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THE BAR CHART COMPARES THE RESULTS OF A SURVEY ABOUT

COFFEE

AND TEA

CONSUMING

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CONSUMPTION

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AND DRINKING HABITS IN AUSTRALIAN FIVE

CITIES

OVERALL

IT IS CLEAR THAT

GOING TO A CAFE FOR TEA OR

COFFEE

WAS THE MOST POPULAR IN ALL COUNTRIES THROUGHOUT THE PERIOD,

WHILE

FIGURES FOR FRESH

COFFEE

HAD HIGHER PERCENTAGES, CONSUMING INSTANT

COFEE

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COFFEE

HAD HIGH DEMAND. IN TERMS OF GOING TO A CAFE FOR

COFFEE

OR TEA, HAD THE HIGHEST DEMAND IN ALL

CITIES

FIGURES

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THE FIGURES

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FOR

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HOBART AND MELBOURNE WERE SLIGHTLY BELOW AT 65%, IN SDNEY

THIS

NUMBER JUST BEING AT 61%, IN

OTHER

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THE OTHER

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TWO

CITIES

STATISTICS

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FOR

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THIS

CATEGORY WELL BELOW THAN 60%. ANOTHER INCREASING TREND WAS OBSERVED IN

PURCHASING

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THE PURCHASING

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OF INSTANT

COFFEE

ALL THE INDICATORS OF IT IN FIVE

CITIES

MORE THAN 45% RESPECTIVELY.TURNING TO

BUYING

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BUY

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FRESH

COFFEE

, IN BOTH SYDNEY AND MELBOURNE PATTERNS WERE HIGHER THAN 40%, BEING AT 44% AND 42% RESPECTIVELY. IN HOBART FRSH

COFFEE

CONSUMING

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CONSUMPTION

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WAS APPROXIMATELY 37%,

HOWEVER

IN BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE

WERE

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WAS

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NEARLY

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apply

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35%.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying or drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

Write a report describing the information in the graph below. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1.

In some countries, there has beeenan increase in the number of parents who are choosin to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+