The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying or drinking habits in five Australian cities.
THE BAR CHART COMPARES THE RESULTS OF A SURVEY ABOUT
COFFEE
AND TEA CONSUMING
AND DRINKING HABITS IN AUSTRALIAN FIVE Replace the word
CONSUMPTION
CITIES
.
OVERALL
, IT IS CLEAR THAT
GOING TO A CAFE FOR TEA OR COFFEE
WAS THE MOST POPULAR IN ALL COUNTRIES THROUGHOUT THE PERIOD, WHILE
FIGURES FOR FRESH COFFEE
HAD HIGHER PERCENTAGES, CONSUMING INSTANT COFEE
HAD HIGH DEMAND.
IN TERMS OF GOING TO A CAFE FOR Correct your spelling
COFFEE
COFFEE
OR TEA, HAD THE HIGHEST DEMAND IN ALL CITIES
, FIGURES
Correct article usage
THE FIGURES
OF
HOBART AND MELBOURNE WERE SLIGHTLY BELOW AT 65%, IN SDNEY Change preposition
FOR
THIS
NUMBER JUST BEING AT 61%, IN OTHER
TWO Correct article usage
THE OTHER
CITIES
STATISTICS OF
Change preposition
FOR
THIS
CATEGORY WELL BELOW THAN 60%.
ANOTHER INCREASING TREND WAS OBSERVED IN PURCHASING
OF INSTANT Correct article usage
THE PURCHASING
COFFEE
ALL THE INDICATORS OF IT IN FIVE CITIES
MORE THAN 45% RESPECTIVELY.TURNING TO BUYING
FRESH Change the verb form
BUY
COFFEE
, IN BOTH SYDNEY AND MELBOURNE PATTERNS WERE HIGHER THAN 40%, BEING AT 44% AND 42% RESPECTIVELY. IN HOBART FRSH COFFEE
CONSUMING
WAS APPROXIMATELY 37%, Replace the word
CONSUMPTION
HOWEVER
IN BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE WERE
NEARLY Correct subject-verb agreement
WAS
TO
35%.Change preposition
apply
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