The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selectingand reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

Summarise the information by selectingand reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The graphic illustrates the romantic
retaion
Correct your spelling
retain
relation
ships of people in Canada and Australia, which are presented as percentages. The largest proportion of citizens in the first country prefer to stay without their parents but not divorced,
in contrast
Linking Words
, the highest percentage of people in Australia are married.
Additionally
Linking Words
, the
last
Linking Words
slide of individuals
adopt to
Verb problem
who
show examples
break the marriage. Taken together, separated but not divorced and married are the major marital
status
Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
show examples
in Canada. Each represents 82% of the population, followed by 29% of citizens who choose the marriage. In Australia the most significant slice of citizens prefer marriage, which shows 46% of individuals, it is nearly as similar as the separated but not divorced factors, which illustrates 41% of the population. in both countries divorce factor is by far the least significant status.
Submitted by mariajoser3 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • marital status
  • population
  • comparison
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • notable
  • widowed
  • divorced
  • single
  • married
  • category
  • segment
  • distribution
  • highlight
  • similarities
  • differences
  • data
  • represent
  • summarize
What to do next:
Look at other essays: