The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
THE LINE GRAPH SHOWS HOW MANY TOURISTS
VISIT
A CARIBBEAN ISLAND FROM 2010 TO 2017.
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VISITED
OVERALL
, IT IS CLEAR THAT
THE VISITORS
BOTH
STAYING ON CRUISE SHIPS AND Correct pronoun usage
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ISLAND
INCREASED SIGNIFICANTLY Fix the agreement mistake
ISLANDS
INCREASED
THROUGHOUT THE PERIOD.
THE NUMBER OF TOTALS WAS 1 Verb problem
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MILLION
AT THE BEGINNING OF THE PERIOD, IT INCREASED CONTINOUSLY
AND REACHED 3.5 Correct your spelling
CONTINUOUSLY
MILLION
VISITORS
IN 2017.
TURNING TO OTHER CATEGORIES, VISITORS
WHO STAYING ON CRUISE SHIPS WERE WELL BELOW 0.5 MILLION
. IT WITNESSED A PERIOD OF FLUCTUATION, THEN
INCREASED AGAIN, HITTING ITS HIGHEST POINT 2 MILLION
IN 2017. Correct article usage
THE NUMBERS
NUMBERS
Fix the agreement mistake
NUMBER
FOR
Change preposition
OF
VISITORS
STAYING ON ISLAND
Correct article usage
THE ISLAND
STARTE
FROM APPROXIMATELY 0.7 Correct your spelling
STARTED
MILLION
, IT STAYED CONSTANT UNTIL 2011. THEN
IT INCREASED STEADILY AND REACHED A PEAK OF 1.5 MILLION
VISITORS
. IT HAD A DROP IN 2016 AND IT FOLLOWED BY A RISE IN 2017.Submitted by afaaslanova07 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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