The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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THE LINE GRAPH SHOWS HOW MANY TOURISTS

VISIT

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VISITED

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A CARIBBEAN ISLAND FROM 2010 TO 2017.

OVERALL

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IT IS CLEAR THAT

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THE

VISITORS

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BOTH

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apply

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STAYING ON CRUISE SHIPS AND

ISLAND

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ISLANDS

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INCREASED SIGNIFICANTLY

INCREASED

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THROUGHOUT THE PERIOD. THE NUMBER OF TOTALS WAS 1

MILLION

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AT THE BEGINNING OF THE PERIOD, IT INCREASED

CONTINOUSLY

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CONTINUOUSLY

AND REACHED 3.5

MILLION

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VISITORS

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IN 2017. TURNING TO OTHER CATEGORIES,

VISITORS

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WHO STAYING ON CRUISE SHIPS WERE WELL BELOW 0.5

MILLION

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. IT WITNESSED A PERIOD OF FLUCTUATION,

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INCREASED AGAIN, HITTING ITS HIGHEST POINT 2

MILLION

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IN 2017.

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THE NUMBERS

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NUMBERS

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NUMBER

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FOR

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VISITORS

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STAYING ON

ISLAND

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THE ISLAND

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STARTE

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STARTED

FROM APPROXIMATELY 0.7

MILLION

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, IT STAYED CONSTANT UNTIL 2011.

THEN

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IT INCREASED STEADILY AND REACHED A PEAK OF 1.5

MILLION

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VISITORS

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. IT HAD A DROP IN 2016 AND IT FOLLOWED BY A RISE IN 2017.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

132 words

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fluctuation
peak
trough
upward trend
downward trend
steady increase
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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduces the ammount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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You recently received an email from your English-speaking friend, Pat, inviting you to stay and asking you to a special party. Read Pat's email and the notes you have made. Then write an email to Pat, using all your notes.

• These days, using chemicals in food production and preservation is increasing. Do the disadvantages of using chemicals in food outweigh the advantages? • Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. • Write at least 250 words.