The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this enegy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this enegy use.
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The pie charts illustrate the energy factor used and the greenhouse gas emissions in Australia, which results are presented in percentages. The majority of the population in the studied country uses energy for heating.
In contrast
, hot water is the activity that shows the most significant portion of smoke emissions.
Additionally
, cooking is by far the least activity which Australians prefer to use. In Australia, heating represents 42% of the population which is double for other uses
such
as lighting and other applications,
whereas
,
this
element is the most contaminant cause for the environment presenting a portion of 35%. The second highest percentage of uses which generate contaminant smoke is other applications representing 28%,
on the other hand
,
this
aspect represents 15% of the population.
Moreover
, cooking is the factor with the minority of gas emissions at 3% and is the element with the least count of percentage (2%) of energy use.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution of energy usage
  • variations in climate
  • substantial use of household energy
  • year-round access
  • energy-efficient lighting solutions
  • seasonal variations
  • geographic location
  • resulting greenhouse gas emissions
  • energy sources
  • cleaner energy sources
  • energy-efficient systems
  • modern, energy-efficient technologies
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