You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Taxes

provide the

government

with revenue to fund public

good

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goods

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and health, some argue that the local

authority

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authorities

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have no

right

to have

tax

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taxes

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and they would rather keep the money to themselves than

giving

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it to the

government

,

although

I highly disagree with

this

belief, as paying

taxes

bridges the gaps between the haves and the have-nots, it is an attempt

also

to share the burden of economic growth. First and foremost, paying

taxes

will help the

government

in the development and maintenance of infrastructure, building new schools,

hospitals

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and hospitals

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and maintaining roads.

Moreover

, funding local

government

entities like police, fire stations and public parks will benefit the

overall

society.

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, Norway is ranked for its best healthcare system in terms of quick medical services, medications and

hospital

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hospitals

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. They believe that everyone has the

right

to better health, regardless of

the

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age, nationality and even gender in return the people pay 40%

taxes

of

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their monthly income.

On the other hand

, some critics argue that paying

tax

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is of no use and they prefer to keep the money for their personal needs. But

this

is not the case, as

taxes

can

also

help poor people to have a chance for a better living, make sure that their children will guarantee a place in schools and

will

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offer them the

right

to be medically treated as they can’t afford expensive medicines and hospitals, which will lead to equality and a mental stable society that all their basic needs are settled.

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, during these Corona times, the nation realized the need for

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improvement in the health & Medicare sector in our country.

Inconclusion

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paying

taxes

is vital for a better society, it will enhance

the

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economic growth and will assist the

government

with all the

suggested

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for a better country and better people. Every citizen or resident has the

right

to

fulfill

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his basic needs. We need

taxes

to run a country, it is not a privilege but a duty.