Some people think that companies and individuals should pay to clear up the pollution they produce and that the government should not pay for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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by

insividuals

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individuals

or

governments

through cleaning up the

pollution

has been a vital topic of debate.

While

some individuals believe that people and factories should pay money to

approch

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approach

this

trend, I strongly

blieve

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believe

that

governments

need to investigate

in

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decreasing

the

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pollution

, which will be discussed by compelling reasons. First of all, these days,

due to

various reasons

such

as the increase in both

popullations

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populations

population

and numerous industries, we are faced

by

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a variety of environmental challenges including

pollution

,

patricularly

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particularly

air

pollution

, So

these kind

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of

pollutions

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pollution

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lead to significant harmful consequences. A prime illustration of

this

,

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is the dramatic increase in rates of dangerous diseases

such

as cancer and heart attacks.

Moreover

, it is avoidable to ban

pollution

completely.

However

, if

governments

have struggled to devote sufficient budget, these

pollotions

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pollutions

pollution

contribute to causing detrimental effects for both societies and individuals as a whole.

Therefore

, it is crucial to devote sufficient budget in order to

decrease

these negative effects gradually.

On the other hand

, it is high time that these challenges need to be

addressing

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and

solving

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.

In other words

,

governments

and agencies should adopt efficient measures to

decrease

the

amoun

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amount

of

pollutions

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pollution

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that

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produced by individuals and companies.

For instance

, the increase

of

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personal vehicles has

been resulted

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in air

pollution

over the years.

Thus

, if

governments

exert an effort to enhance public transportation, the rates of using personal cars would

decrease

dramatically. Despite avoidable increasing

pollution

,

governments

need to take excessive amounts of budget

in

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effective solutions,

such

as improving public transportation to alleviate detrimental consequences. In conclusion,

while

there are different opinions about investing money to

decrease

pollution

,

i

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firmly believe that

this

urgent issue needs to

be addresses

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by

governments

.

Moreover

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governments

can implement

effecient

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efficient

policies, which not only could

decrease

pollutions

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pollution

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but can

also

leads

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to sustainable effective solutions.