The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
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The given bar chart illustrates the share of families owning and renting where they lived in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
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households
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in rented accommodation declined in the timeframe except for the end year which had a rise.
However
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households
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in owned accommodation increased in timespan except for the final year which had a decline. The share of families who lived in their house was nearly 25 percent in 1918 and grew continuously to hit its peak which was approximately 70 percent in 2001.
Then
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, it had a fall in 2011 to attain nearly 65 per cent.
Moreover
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households
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before 1971 lived more in rented places
although
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after
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this
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year they lived in owned ones.
Additionally
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, half families lived in a place owned and the other half lived in rented ones in 1971. The proportion of
households
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living in rented accommodation was about 75 per cent in 1918 and decreased constantly to reach the minimum share which was about 30 per cent in 2001.
Therefore
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, it had an upward trend to attain nearly 35 percent in 2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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