The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided graph illustrates the average temperatures of Mombasa, Kenya; Cairo, Egypt and Cape Town, South Africa all over a
year
.
Overall
, Cairo skyrocketed to the highest level and plummeted to the
last
position
at the end
of the
year
, and unlikely, Cape Town experienced a downward trend in the middle months before reaching the previous temperature.
However
, Mombasa maintained almost the same level throughout the whole
year
.
To begin
with, Cairo started at the
last
position, standing at 55 Fahrenheit,
while
Cape Town had 15 degrees more in the first month. In the summer months, Egyptian city climbed to around 82
F
which was the highest temperature among the others,
whereas
South African city witnessed a considerable decline to 55
F
, positioned at the
last
. Till the end, both came back to the past temperature, stabilising at approximately 55 and 70
F
respectively.
On the other hand
, Mombasa remained stable apart from little variations throughout the
year
.In March, it increased slightly and went down to 75
F
from 80
F
in the middle of the
year
. Eventually, it rose to 80 Fahrenheit levelled out at the first place.
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