The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pictures illustrate a
city
hospital and ways to reach it in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the
staff
and public
car
park
,
bus
stops were removed.
Moreover
, a public
car
park
, a
staff
car
park
, a
bus
station and two roundabouts were constructed.
Also
, the
City
Hospital, Ring
Road
,
City
Road
and Hospital Rd were unchanged. The Ring
Road
and
City
Hospital were not modified at the top of the
map
.
Additionally
, a public
car
park
was built on the right side.
Subsequently
, the
staff
and public
car
park
was replaced by a
staff
car
park
in the middle right. It is evident that the
bus
stops were removed in the middle.
Then
, two squares were built on the hospital
road
in the middle of the
map
.
Also
, a
bus
station was constructed on the left side of the
map
.
Therefore
, the
city
road
at the bottom of the
map
was not revised.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, staff, car, park, bus, road, map with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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