The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014.

 

 Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of the consumption of various three jam sorts in Asian countries between 1991 and 2014.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that strawberries had a remarkable decrease,
whereas
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both cherry and lemon plummeted slightly during the given period. Observing the chart in more detail, lemon's number fluctuated from 1996 to 2011 before it fell slightly to nearly 40
tons
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in 2014.
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, cherries in 2011 climbed sharply to approximately 80
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.
Then
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, it gradually decreased in 2014 to almost 77
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.
In contrast
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, the number of strawberries had a slow sorted before dropping significantly from about 160
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in 1996 to around 42
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in 2014. One striking piece of information to be noticed is that both strawberry and lemon had an equal amount of roughly 100
tons
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • upward trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • popular
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