Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Consuming
convenience
has a significant place in
todays
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today's
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world. Traditional
food
consuming
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consumption
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is less preferred than
convenience
food
. Some
people
agrees
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agree
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that ready-to-use
food
is much more better than homemade traditional
food
.
However
, some
people
says
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the opposite. It is often discussed that traditional
food
is healthier than
convenience
food
. On the one hand, ready-to-use
food
saves a lot of
time
and it is easy to prepare. To elaborate on
this
,
full
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full-time
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time
workers
doesn't
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don't
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have enough
time
to prepare a meal for themselves. Namely, they are more tend to consume fast
foods
.
In other words
, workers choose the simple way rather than the complicated way to save their
time
.
Additionally
,
majority
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the majority
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of
people
thinks
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think
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that
convenience
food
is much more tasty than traditional
food
food
and it is much more preferred across the globe.
On the other hand
, studies show that
convenience
food
cause
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causes
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obesity by consuming fast
food
. Doctors
advices
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advises
advise
that
people
should consume
foods
that include
vegetable
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vegetables
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and organic products. Because
,
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vegetable and organic products
has
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have
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better effects
to
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on
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human
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the human
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body. Namely,
people
should choose
consuming
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to consume
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traditional homemade
foods
rather than
convenience
food
. Another research says that
convenience
food
has bad effects on human psychology.
On the contrary
traditional
foods
has
better
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a better
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effect on psychology. In conclusion,
people
tend to choose
convenience
food
because it is much
easy
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easier
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to prepare and it has a significant advantage
o
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for
workers that
doesn't
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don't
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have
time
to prepare a meal in
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the old-fashion
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old-fashion
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old-fashioned
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way.
Nevertheless
, studies
recommends
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recommend
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that traditional homemade
foods
are healthier
to
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for
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human
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the human
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body. My view is that
,
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apply
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traditional
foods
are better
to
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for
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human
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the human
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body and
it
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they
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should be much
more
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apply
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preferred
than
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to
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fast
foods
.
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