The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph demonstrates the percentage of people from 1970 to 2020 in four Asian countries living in
citites
, and predictions for 2030 to 2040.
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cities
Overall
, we can see that the percentages of population
in Malaysia and Thailand are lowest and highest, respectively between 1970 and 2040.
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the population
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is Malaysia and Indonesia, the percentages of population
in Malaysia and Indonesia Add an article
the population
dramaticlly
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to 80 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and from over 10 Change the spelling
per cent
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to under 60 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, respectively between 1970 and 2040.
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per cent
Other
countries, we can see that the percentage of people in the Philipines and Thailand increased Change preposition
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slight
. They accounted for over 30% to over 40% and from under 20% to over 10% in 1970 and 2010. After that, from 2010 to 2040, the Change the adjective
slightly
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proportion
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proportion
population
in Add an article
the population
Philipines
and Thailand increasedCorrect article usage
the Philipines
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