The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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demonstrates the

comparision

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comparison

of 4

countries

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between 1970 and 2020 with predicted

firgures

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for 2030 and 2024.

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, the projections give us that the whole 4

countries

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are going to witness a

dramatically increasing

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dramatic increase

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in the proportion of city residents, with

Malayxia

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Malaysia

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expected to receive the highest growth. In 1970, the percentage of urban

inhabitant

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inhabitants

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of

Philippines

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the Philippines

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and Malaysia

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the same that at around 30%, compared to 20%

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Thailand and 15%

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Indonesia

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Malaysia saw the most dramatic upgrade, with

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rising up to 75% in 2020. Indonesia took the other two to be the country with the second largest urban

poplation

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population

, with nearly half of the

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population living in cities in 2020.

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Philippines witnessed a decline in the proportion of urban residents between 1990 and 2010.

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Thailand’s

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went up steadily to over 30% by 2020. By 2040,

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is

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that the urban populations of all these

countries

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will increase, and Malaysia

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will still

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the top of the list, at nearly 85%, followed by Indonesia at more than 60%. The

firgure

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for the other two

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are

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expected to rise.

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, at a slower rate, with about 55% of

Philippine

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Filipinos

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and around 45% of Thailand being able to live in cities by 2040.