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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three dif erent areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three dif erent areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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Australia,
Canada
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 and the
European
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Community
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 from 1985 to 1990. The numbers show the amount of
wheat
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 in
million
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tonnes
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. There are some fluctuations happening in both
Canada
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 and the
European
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Community
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.
Canada
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, starting the strongest at around 19
million
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tonnes
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, experienced the largest variation. It went through a slight fall in the first year,
then
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 skyrocketed to a new peak at 25
million
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tonnes
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 in1988. The pattern continued as it plunged before rising again and ended at about 18
million
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tonnes
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. Despite having a similar trend, Australian
wheat
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 exports did show an increase in 1986 before continuing the downfall throughout the interval of five years to around 12
million
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tonnes
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. The
European
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Community
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 is the only one which had a growth of
wheat
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 exported globally between 1985 and 1990. It underwent a drop early on, falling to the lowest among the others at about 14
million
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tonnes
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 in1986 from around 17
million
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tonnes
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.
However
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, it steadily gained back its momentum and surged up to become the highest in 1990, sitting at 21
million
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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, the
European
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Community
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 was the only one who climbed up in numbers of sending
wheat
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 abroad,
while
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 Australia was steadily declining and
Canada
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 fluctuated quite wildly.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, european, community, wheat, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • compare
  • pattern
  • peak
  • noteworthy
  • consistency
  • stability
  • overview
  • analyze
  • summarize
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