You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of different kinds of vehicles registered in Europe from 1996 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the number of different types of vehicles registered in Europe between 1996 and 2006.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that while
public services were the least considerable things, the cars had registered in the highest number.
To begin
with, public transport including buses, coaches and taxis faced the same as well as
the lowest amount of registrations over the period. Although
,
car ownership was the thing which witnessed an increase of 26,32% from 1996 to 2006, all other vehicles overtaked the cars by 30,00.
Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, preferences
Fix the agreement mistake
preference
of
lorries had witnessed a decline of 20,00 which was nearly half faced by motorcycles.Change preposition
for
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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