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The line graph shows the amount of poutine* and French fries consumed between 1990 and 2010 in Canada. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main trends and comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the amount of poutine* and French fries consumed between 1990 and 2010 in Canada. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main trends and comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the consumption of
poutine
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 and french
fries
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 by Canadian
people
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 between the
years
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 ( 1990 and 2010
Overall
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,
people
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 in Canada consumed
fries
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 more at the beginning of the
year
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 but the trend of
poutine
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 surpassed the
fries
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 after the
year
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 2000. French
fries
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 were most loved by the Canadian public, they used to consume more than 100 grams per
week
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 during 1990 and
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 trend remained popular for six to seven
years
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. Around the
year
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 2000,
people
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 started loving
poutine
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 as well and the per
week
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 consumption of
poutine
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 and
fries
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 came to the same level ( between 140gm-155gm per
week
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). The intake of
fries
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 kept increasing and reached up to 250gms/
week
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 in 2005 and it reached 300gm in 2010.
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 the love for
poutine
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 was low in Canadian
people
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 in the starting
years
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. They used to eat
poutine
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 less than 100 grams per
week
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 for almost five
years
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 from 1990-1995. After 1995,
people
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 started loving
poutine
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 more than
fries
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 and
this
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 surpassed the per
week
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 consumption of the
fries
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. in 2000 its weekly intake was around 15gms per
week
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, which doubled in five
years
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. Poutinr remained high in demand from 2005 to 2010 and reached its highest value of 350 grams per
week
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 in the
year
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 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words poutine, fries, people, years, year, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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