You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: -What course are you doing now -Why you are not satisfied with that course -what course would you like to change to

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Hello MR , Osama . I want to change to another

course

, I am unhappy with my present

course

Firstly

, I asked you before to add me to the finance

course

which

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thought be useful for me ,

However

,I realised recently is not good for me , I tried to understand it , But I couldn'

do it

Also

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was studying more the other students

however

that is

my extremely at finance ,

Moreover

, I spent one month

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couldn'

see any benefit , I wanted to expand my education in

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different science , But , In my opinion, I can'

, Because the finance isn'

my major , I have ever studied it before.

therefore

, I want to change to an accounting

course

, Because

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can understand

the

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accounting ,

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my skills in my major more and more than before , I would be useful to the company if you helped me to change it . Thank you ,

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am looking forward to hearing back from you .

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coherence cohesion

Organize the letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea. This will improve the flow and readability.

coherence cohesion

Consider revising the greeting to be more formal. Addressing the recipient as "Mr." followed by their last name is more appropriate in a formal letter.

task achievement

Elaborate on specific reasons why the finance course is unsuitable and how the accounting course will better meet your educational goals.

task achievement

You clearly state your current dissatisfaction and your desire to switch courses, which effectively addresses the task requirement.

task achievement

There is a consistent effort to explain your reasons for wanting to change courses, showing good engagement with the task.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

183 words

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