You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: -What course are you doing now -Why you are not satisfied with that course -what course would you like to change to
Hello MR , Osama . I want to change to another
course
, I am unhappy with my present course
.
Firstly
, I asked you before to add me to the finance course
which i
thought be useful for me , Change the capitalization
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However
,I realised recently is not good for me , I tried to understand it , But I couldn't
do it Also
i
was studying more the other students Change the capitalization
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however
that is
my extremely at finance , Moreover
, I spent one month i
couldn'Change the capitalization
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see any benefit , I wanted to expand my education in a
different science , But , In my opinion, I can'Remove the article
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, Because the finance isn't
my major , I have ever studied it before.
therefore
, I want to change to an accounting course
, Because i
can understand Change the capitalization
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the
accounting , Correct article usage
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In addition
to improve
my skills in my major more and more than before , I would be useful to the company if you helped me to change it .
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am looking forward to hearing back from you .Change the capitalization
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coherence cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea. This will improve the flow and readability.
coherence cohesion
Consider revising the greeting to be more formal. Addressing the recipient as "Mr." followed by their last name is more appropriate in a formal letter.
task achievement
Elaborate on specific reasons why the finance course is unsuitable and how the accounting course will better meet your educational goals.
task achievement
You clearly state your current dissatisfaction and your desire to switch courses, which effectively addresses the task requirement.
task achievement
There is a consistent effort to explain your reasons for wanting to change courses, showing good engagement with the task.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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