The table below show the persentage of men and women employed in four different types of industries in one town in 1990, 2000, and 2010
The table gives information about how many males and females worked in four different types of facilities in one town in 1990,2000 and 2010.
Overall
, Manufacturing reached the peak point in 1990 for men
while
it was the smallest degree after three decades for women
.
The jobs called retail and shops stayed constant for male employees with 13 per cent for those 3 periods also
female workers started to larger with 7 % till 9 %. Health employment was increased gradually for two types of genes. It stayed permanent in 1990 and 2000 for men
at 7 per cent while
for women
was increased significantly after 30 years and it reached 15 per cent.
Manufacturing reached the maximum by men
in 1990 with 30% and it started to decrease to 15 % in 2000, when it showed 10 percentages for men
in 2010 so it showed the smallest point for women
with 3 %. Tourism was a special job for females rather than males . Because for the men
it decreased gradually and it stayed equal in two periods with 10 % while
women
reached the peak percentage with 27 % which included 4 types of employment.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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