The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram demonstrates the procedure for recycling plastic bottles.
Overall
, it is clear that
the cycle begins with allocating plastic bottles among other rubbish in the garbages
and eventually, it ends up with manufacturing ready goods at the final stage.
Correct subject-verb agreement
garbage
To begin
with, in the first step, the bottles are collected by hand, and then
, they are gone to specific recycling vehicles. Shortly afterwards, they are sent to be sorted in the recycling centre before going and oppressing into blocks.
Furthermore
, at the 5th stage, the blocks which are compressed, are crushed and washed straight away. Later, plastic pellets are produced and heated these pellets in order to obtain raw material and raw material is classified. Consequently
, end products such
as t-shirts, pencils and recycled bags are generated.Submitted by novruzluahmed2007 on
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