Some
people
believe that protection of Use synonyms
climate
Use synonyms
changes
is Fix the agreement mistake
change
waste
of money. Correct article usage
a waste
Personally
I support the idea that it will be beneficial to live in an urban area.
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Personally,
Climate
change includes a range of issues to need to Use synonyms
be tackle
in each country. Change the verb form
be tackled
Firstly
the government should introduce some laws in order to contribute to Linking Words
improve
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improving
the
green open spaces. Correct article usage
apply
In other words
, not only the fresh air, natural habitats and greeny atmosphere could be useful for human health, but these factors Linking Words
also
will extend their Linking Words
life time
in the future rather than now. So as long as certain factories and other buildings which release fossil fuels could be relocating Correct your spelling
lifetime
other
places Change preposition
to other
which
Correct word choice
where
people
don't live. Use synonyms
Then
, the life rate could Linking Words
be experienced
a significant rise . At the same time, the government should approach to protect wild animals equally. Wild animals, because, as a great tooling changing in the world.
Having said that, there Wrong verb form
experience
are
a type of problems related to Change the verb form
is
the
Correct article usage
apply
climate
change, humans Use synonyms
also
lend Linking Words
a
help to Remove the article
apply
unit
with nature. First and foremost individuals should Add an article
the unit
a unit
also
use more public transport rather than private cars. If more Linking Words
people
could Use synonyms
be use
Change the verb form
use
a public transport
, a range of vehicles release more exhaust fumes Remove the article
public transport
a means of public transport
a mode of public transport
to
the atmosphere. Change preposition
into
Linking Words
Similarly
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Similarly,
people
ought to prefer the packaging items Use synonyms
than
new ones . The waste is a good example Change preposition
to
for
Change preposition
of
this
because Linking Words
the
human waste Correct article usage
apply
be
a large segment Change the verb form
is
that is
Linking Words
improve
the poor air .
In conclusion, some Wrong verb form
improving
people
think that there are some disadvantages Use synonyms
for protect
the environment. Change preposition
to protecting
Nevertheless
in my mind , the protection Linking Words
need
to prevent a lot of Change the verb form
needs
climate
changes.Use synonyms
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