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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fea make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart provides information about the proportion of
water
usage
 in various parts -North
America
, South
America
,
Europe
,
Africa
 Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
- of the world.
Overall
, it is evident that the highest percentages of
water
 use for agriculture in South
America
,
Africa
, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
,
whereas
this
 figure for North
America
 and
Europe
 is industrial. Looking in more detail, the biggest
water
 utilization is an industry at 48%,
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% in North
America
 and
Europe
,
while
 these stats account for the lowest rate at 10% in South
America
.
Additionally
, the ratio of irrigation comprises 71% in South
America
, and the remaining part of
water
usage
 is domestic. Agriculture takes up 39% and 32% of the total
water
 utilization in North
America
 and
Europe
, respectively. Regarding the remaining areas, the ratio of irrigation comprises dominance in
Africa
, Central
Asia
 and South East
Asia
, ranging from 81%-88%. Unlike other countries, the proportion of industrial
usage
 was 12% in South East
Asia
,
this
 data for
Africa
 and Central
Asia
 take up tiny percentages. When it comes to domestic use, the percentage of it constitutes the same at 7% in parts of
Asia
,
although
 total
usage
 of it comprises more than 2% in
Africa
 as opposed to
Asia
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, america, europe, africa, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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