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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fea make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fea make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart provides information about the proportion of
water
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usage
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 in various parts -North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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,
Africa
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 Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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- of the world.
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, it is evident that the highest percentages of
water
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 use for agriculture in South
America
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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,
whereas
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this
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 figure for North
America
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 and
Europe
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 is industrial. Looking in more detail, the biggest
water
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 utilization is an industry at 48%,
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% in North
America
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 and
Europe
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,
while
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 these stats account for the lowest rate at 10% in South
America
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.
Additionally
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, the ratio of irrigation comprises 71% in South
America
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, and the remaining part of
water
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usage
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 is domestic. Agriculture takes up 39% and 32% of the total
water
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 utilization in North
America
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 and
Europe
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, respectively. Regarding the remaining areas, the ratio of irrigation comprises dominance in
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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, ranging from 81%-88%. Unlike other countries, the proportion of industrial
usage
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 was 12% in South East
Asia
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,
this
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 data for
Africa
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 and Central
Asia
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 take up tiny percentages. When it comes to domestic use, the percentage of it constitutes the same at 7% in parts of
Asia
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,
although
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 total
usage
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 of it comprises more than 2% in
Africa
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 as opposed to
Asia
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, america, europe, africa, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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