The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the genres of
music
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albums purchased by the British based on their genders and ages.
Overall
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, it is evident that all 3 types of
music
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were purchased more by males compared to women.
Furthermore
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, except for Classical
Music
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, youngsters tended to buy
music
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albums with a bigger preference than other age groups,
whereas
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adults had a tendency to purchase classical ones. Looking in more detail, the higher rates of purchases of the pop genre are population those who were 16-24 and 25-34 ages at around 32%, though
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figure for adults took up about 10%. In terms of gender comparison, the proportion of males was significantly higher rather than females, with roughly 30% compared to almost 18%. When it comes to Rock
music
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, the identical trend experienced since the young was leader, followed by the same tendency. Regarding the remaining type of
music
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Albom, different from other categories, the percentages of adults comprised almost 20%, making it the dominant.
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, the ratio of the 16-24 age group of people accounted for approximately 17%,
although
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other groups made up around tiny percentages.
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other
music
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genres, the male rate for buying Classical
music
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surpassed the ratio of females by about 3%.
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