The given diagram shows the process of of manufacturing bricks for the building industry.

The given diagram shows the process of of manufacturing bricks for the building industry.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The given diagram shows the process of of manufacturing bricks for the building industry.
Overall
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, it is obvious from the diagram that the process of making
bricks
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has 7 steps to be
prapered
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prepared
for delivery.
Firstly
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, a big digger collects
clay
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from the ground.
Secondly
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, the
clay
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goes through a roller where a metal grid filters the
clay
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.
Thirdly
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, sand and water are mixed with the filtered
clay
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, and they go through a wire cutter, and
then
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they are put on a mould.
Bricks
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are coming out of
this
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mould.
Next,
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bricks
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are put in a drying oven for 24 to 48 hours to dry. After that,
bricks
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are put in a large
ractangular
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rectangular
shaped machine where they go through moderate temperature (200
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degree
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degrees
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celsius
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Celsius
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to
980
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980-degree
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degree
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celsius
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Celsius
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) to high temperature (800
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degree
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degrees
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celcius
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Celcius
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to 1300
degree
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celsius
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Celsius
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), and
then
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in a cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. In the next stage, the
bricks
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are going through packaging.
Finally
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,
bricks
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become ready for delivery through a truck.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay, degree with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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