A friend had a new born baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit to give it to him / her. Write a letter to – - Congratulate your friend. - Tell him why you picked up the mentioned present. - Suggest arrangements for the visit.

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Dear Aman , How're you ? It's been a long time since we met each other and congratulations
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baby
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boy . I'm really happy for you . Actually , I bought a beautiful white cotton dress for
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baby
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. Because
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the stuff of dress is not only made with pure cotton but
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comfortable for the skin of
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new born
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baby
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.
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was shopping for the
baby
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then
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i
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saw the other babies
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wearing the same dresses and they were
soo
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cute in that . So , that's why
i
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purchased
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dress for our
baby
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.
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, I can't wait to see
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new born
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and what about
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coming
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.
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If you're free
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can come
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your home .
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, tell me any other day
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your convenience .
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want
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share some exciting news with you . I will await
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your response and congratulations once again . Love , Harjeet kaur
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
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greeting and closing
Appropriate greeting and closing make the letter feel friendly and personal.
task achievement
You successfully addressed all the points in the task: congratulating your friend, explaining your gift choice, and suggesting a visit.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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