A friend had a new born baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit to give it to him / her. Write a letter to – - Congratulate your friend. - Tell him why you picked up the mentioned present. - Suggest arrangements for the visit.
Dear Aman ,
How're you ? It's been a long time since we met each other and congratulations
for
your Change preposition
on
new born
Correct your spelling
newborn
baby
boy . I'm really happy for you .
Actually , I bought a beautiful white cotton dress for little
Add an article
a little
the little
baby
. Because ,
the stuff of dress is not only made with pure cotton but Remove the comma
apply
it
Correct your spelling
is
also
comfortable for the skin of Add an article
the new
a new
new born
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newborn
baby
.Fix the agreement mistake
babies
Moreover
, when i
was shopping for the Change the capitalization
I
baby
then
i
saw the other babies Change the capitalization
I
was
wearing the same dresses and they were Change the verb form
were
soo
cute in that . So , that's why Correct your spelling
so
i
purchased Change the capitalization
I
this
dress for our baby
.
Moreover
, I can't wait to see Add an article
the new
a new
new born
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newborn
baby
and what about this
coming sunday
Change the capitalization
Sunday
.
If you're free Change the punctuation
?
then
i
can come Change the capitalization
I
at
your home . Change preposition
to
Otherwise
, tell me any other day according to
your convenience . Apart from
this
, I also
want
share some exciting news with you .
I will await Add the particle
want to
for
your response and congratulations once again .
Love ,
Harjeet kaurChange preposition
apply
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greeting and closing
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task achievement
You successfully addressed all the points in the task: congratulating your friend, explaining your gift choice, and suggesting a visit.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,